What Margaret Wanted

Margaret Vance-Halloran had wanted the house since she was nineteen years old, and she had never once said so out loud.

That was the thing people got wrong about her, including both her brothers and her one husband. They thought the wanting was the problem. The wanting was not the problem. Margaret had wanted things her whole life with a patience that would have impressed a Jesuit — she had wanted the department chair and waited six years for it, she had wanted the Cape house and bought it in a bad market when everyone told her not to, she had wanted her son to finish the degree and had said nothing, nothing, for two entire years, until he finished it.

She did not want the house because it was worth two million dollars. She had two million dollars. She wanted it because when she was nineteen she had come home in February with her whole life on fire, and her mother had put her in the blue bedroom at the back and fed her and asked her nothing for five weeks, and Margaret had lain in that room listening to the radiators tick and had understood for the first time that a house could be a kind of argument. That it could say: whatever else is true, you came from somewhere.

She had assumed — the way you assume the sun — that it would come to her. Not as a prize. As a continuation.

So when Ellis Grange read that paragraph, what Margaret felt was not greed and was not even quite grief. It was the specific vertigo of a person who discovers that a story they have been living inside was, from the other side, a completely different story.

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She did not go home. She drove the four miles to Harrow Lane and parked across the road and sat looking at it.

Shutters closed. Leaves not raked — Rosa had not raked them, and it occurred to Margaret with a small nasty pleasure that Rosa would now have to pay someone to rake them, and then it occurred to her that Rosa had raked them herself for twenty-six years, and she made herself stop.

Her phone had eleven missed calls. Nine were Peter.

She called Karen Pruitt instead.

“I heard,” Karen said.

“How.”

“Ellis Grange called me at eleven forty. Professional courtesy. He wanted me to know he’d advised her to get counsel.”

“He advised her — “

“Margaret.” Karen had been her lawyer for six years and had earned the first name. “Slow down. He’s covering himself. If she goes unrepresented and loses, the whole thing gets appealed on the grounds that a sixty-one-year-old woman with a ninth-grade education got steamrolled, and then we’re doing this again in three years with worse facts. You want her to have a lawyer. You want her to have a good one.”

Margaret watched a squirrel work its way along the top of the stone wall her grandfather had built.

“Tell me what we have.”

“I’ll tell you what we have when I’ve read the instrument. What I can tell you now is what you already know: it’s a hard case. Undue influence is hard. Testamentary capacity is harder. She had a doctor’s letter, Margaret. She got examined the same week she signed. That’s not a woman being manipulated, that’s a woman anticipating you.”

“Or a woman being coached by somebody who anticipated me.”

A pause. “That’s an argument,” Karen said. “It’s not a good one yet.”

“Then make it good. I’ve been sending you things for seven years.”

“You’ve been sending me a folder,” Karen said. “And I want to be honest with you about the folder, because you’re paying me for honesty and not for comfort. What’s in that folder is a woman who got closer to her housekeeper than her children liked. That’s not a crime. Juries — probate judges, in this case — they don’t hate that story. They’ve lived that story. Half of them have a mother in a home somewhere being visited by an aide more often than by a son.”

Margaret didn’t answer.

“The payments are the only real thing in there,” Karen went on. “Eleven years of them. That’s what I’d build on. But I need to know what they were for before I put them in a filing, because if there’s an innocent explanation and I don’t know it, opposing counsel gets to be the one who tells the judge.”

“Eleven years of payments to a housekeeper’s family in Mexico.”

“To an address in Puebla, yes. Roughly nine hundred a month. Margaret — that could be anything. That could be a woman helping another woman’s mother.”

“It’s two hundred and thirty thousand dollars.”

Karen went quiet.

“Over eleven years,” Margaret said. “I added it up on the drive. Two hundred and thirty-one thousand and change. And my mother never mentioned it. Not once, not to me, not to the accountant, not on any tax document I’ve ever seen. And I want you to tell me what kind of a woman helps out with somebody’s mother in secret for eleven years.”

“A private one,” Karen said.

“Or a frightened one.”

The squirrel reached the gatepost and stopped.

“There’s an envelope,” Margaret said.

“I know. Grange told me. He also told me the condition.”

“All three of us, jointly, and only if we file.”

“Which means,” Karen said slowly, “that whatever’s in it, your mother expected it to change your mind. Or she expected it to hurt enough that you’d stop. Those are the only two reasons anybody sets up a door like that.”

Margaret watched the closed shutters of the blue bedroom at the back of the house, second floor, third window.

“Then she misjudged me,” she said.

“Did she?”

“File on Monday.”

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Peter called at nine that night and Margaret let it ring twice before she picked up, because she had learned that Peter said the real thing in the first six seconds and the performance started at seven.

“How bad is it,” he said.

“Karen’s filing Monday.”

“That’s not what I asked.”

“It’s a hard case.”

“How bad, Margaret.”

She sat down on the edge of her bed. “If we lose, we get the specific bequests. You get the hall clock.”

The sound Peter made was not a laugh.

“I need you to tell me something,” Margaret said, “and I need you to tell me the true version, because Karen is going to find it in about eleven days either way, and I would very much rather hear it from you tonight.”

“Don’t.”

“Have you borrowed against it.”

The silence went on a long time. She could hear a television somewhere behind him, and a woman’s voice that wasn’t his wife’s.

“Peter.”

“Two hundred and forty,” he said. “Against expected distribution. Signed in August.”

Margaret closed her eyes. “August. She was alive in August.”

“She was in hospice in August.”

“You signed a note against your mother’s estate while she was in hospice.”

“I signed a note in August because the alternative was in July,” Peter said, and for once there was nothing performed in it at all. “You have a Cape house. I have a number. That’s the difference between us and it’s been the difference since 1994, and I’m not going to be lectured about it tonight by somebody who got the good decade.”

Margaret opened her eyes.

“Who holds the note,” she said.

“Does it matter?”

“Peter. Who holds it.”

Another silence. Shorter.

“Diane’s ex-husband,” Peter said.